*I was sent this book free of charge so I could read it and create this review*
I did have a little confusion with the characters in the beginning as the character development was lacking in some areas. A lot of names without a lot of backstory can create a tough environment to keep straight. Eventually the names became more clear which allowed me to follow the story more smoothly.
This book evolves over a very long time span. As it takes place during the second world war, we are quite invested in the characters over the time of the war and it seems quite natural to follow the characters to their logical endpoint.
The only real issue I had is the proofreading and/or editing is absent in this book. There are misused commas and semicolons, as well as spelling mistakes and just wrong word usage and grammar mistakes. I think this book would have benefited hugely by having a few other people read it to check for errors before it was published.
As a work of historical fiction I think The Ministry Communications Unit is a very successful story. The plot is well conceived, the characters actions seem fitting for the time and the background of the war provides an easily researchable and acceptable scenario for this story. With a little editing I would say this book could be extremely successful.